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@@ -13,7 +13,9 @@ It is not simply enough that there are multiple redundant systems. What we want
 We want a hierarchical network. We want federation not simply because of reliability, but because you need fences and limits to build healthy cultures.
 
 # The World Wide Web is Anonymous
-Anonymity can lead to a lot of bad actions. But also exposing privat
+Anonymity can lead to a lot of bad actions. But it is motivated because exposing your entire identity to the entire world is dangerous. Hierarchy solves this problem. It permits us the freedom to be safely known.
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+The World doesn't want this decentralized approach to privacy so it resorts to oppressive social credit scores. The point 
 
 # A Day with the Catholic Intranet